Updates a-plenty

The last few weeks have been a bit of a blur. One after another, things happened that completely interferred with anything remotely related to fun. My day job moved to a new office last weekend. Physically, it is only a few hundred feet down the hall, but we had to move roughly thirty machines, three racks, and coordinate the transfer of 5 T1 lines, all with minimal downtime. The move took nearly twelve hours on Saturday, but it is finished. I even have my own office, to which I will be eternally grateful.

Dena’s car has been acting strangely lately. Despite new tires and breaks, there was still a persistent squeal whenever the car turned right. Then, late last week, the ignition froze up while Dena was running errands. After twenty minutes of trying to force the wheel to turn and free the ignition, it turned. With nearly 115,000 miles on it, we decided to call it quits and get a new car. Dena is now happily driving a 2003 Kia Optima SE V6. It’s a nice, classy-looking car. It’s more compact than her old Chrystler Sybring Convertible, and actually fits in the garage without me having to knock out a wall. I expect this one to last much longer than the previous vehicle.

To top things off, I had to miss my writers group meeting last Thursday. That was made worse by the fact that I had a story up for critique. That’s been postponed to the next meeting.

Taxes. Let’s not mention taxes, or the large checks we had to write yesterday.

Speaking of writing, I have two new stories on the burner. One in-group, and two more waiting for revision. I don’t have any set deadlines for when they’ll be finished, because I seem to miss every one I set. Instead I’m just going to keep plugging away at it, until I feel like one is ready enough to submit. I am starting to make more time for writing, now that things have settled back down again.

Whoops

Some of you may have noticed (and a few have chided me) that I haven’t updated the blog recently. Things have been very frantic lately, and things have been neglected. This is just a quick note, since it seems the rest of the recent content has fallen off the front page. I’ll make a more detailed entry later today.

Revision Time

Ironically, this is the second draft of this post. The first got eaten when IE::Mac and MoveableType decided to agree to disagree as to who I was and if I was logged in.

I currently have four complete short stories in first draft condition sitting on my desk, all in need of revision. One sat there for months until I finally forced myself to submit it to group. I tend to finish a first draft, make a few minor revisions and then move on to the next one. This is far from productive. Some, like the one noted above, would do well sent to the group for critique. Even in their first draft state, they will be able to provide critical insight that will help me in the second and third drafts, until I ultimately have a polished piece ready to submit to the market.

Thus far I am falling fall short of my goal of one submission per month. I need to focus my attention on finishing these drafts, polishing them up, and sending them out. That’s my current and immediate short-term goal. I want to have a second draft of “A Cup of Tea” (was “A Tea for Two”) finished this weekend and pending a final read from Dena, ready to send out next week. Following that I have “Temperament” in desperate need of a critical eye. By that time, “Shaken, not Stirred” will be back from group with valuable feedback and I can begin its revisions as well. By mid-May I should have two stories in circulation and a third sent to group.

Revision is the mark of a writer and so far I have been falling short of that mark. While my original goal may have been a fair bit too optimistic, I think that if I remain focused that I will be able to get those submissions out, and that will feel pretty darn good.

Auckland bound

After two years of discussion and dreaming, it’s official: we’re going to New Zealand. I booked the tickets this morning. We’ll be flying Air New Zealand, departing from Los Angeles on December 2nd, and arriving back stateside on December 18th. We’re still working out some of the specific details such as housing and the places we want to see.

It’s hard to find the words to express how excited I am. New Zealand is one of the countries that I’ve always wanted to visit. I plan on taking a lot of pictures, and keeping a daily journal of our travels (although available Internet access will delay timely posting). I know that there are a number of Internet Cafe’s through the larger cities, but I don’t know how often we’ll be nearby.

It’s exciting to know that an adventure is on the horizon. Granted, it’s nearly nine months away, but that doesn’t change the feeling of excitement at the thought .

Protested liberties

I fully support freedom of speech and the right to protest, but some recent events have really raised my ire. We were watching the news on Thursday night and decided to turn on some regular television. We flipped the channel over to he local NBC station out of Chicago, but were in the middle of an interuption. A group of around 1,000 protesters flooded Lake Shore Drive, a major road that runs alone the lakefront. NBC had a camera on the scene and was panning the ground. Protesters were walking among the vehicles, pounding on them with their hands.

A protest organizer with a bullhorn challenged police to try to shun the image they gained from the 1968 protests. Police waded into the crowd to grab the protester.

The thing that bothers me is that these protesters crossed the line. They went beyond expressing their freedom of speech by blocking vehicles and taunting police. The following day, protesters gathered downtown and tried to block the entrance to federal buildings by laying down in front of the entrance, forcing police to restrain them and drag them away.

I understand the desire to have your voice heard, and protesting is a natural extension of that. Holding a captive audience, taunting police, and other acts of so-called civil disobedience do nothing but hurt your cause. It takes away from the credibility your voice might have had otherwise.

News junkie

Being the news junkie that I am, I’ve scoured the web for good news sources. Mainstream media outlets are easy to find, especially thanks to news.google.com. Finding reliable streaming audio or video seems to be much more difficult.

CNN has a free audio stream, but it seems to repeat the same news over and over. The BBC has a video stream, but I had problems with it staying up. It would time out every few minutes. MSNBC has a video stream, but it suffered under heavy traffic as well. I finally jumped on the WLS-AM stream. They were rebroadcasting the ABC news feed for most of the day, but eventually stopped and returned to normal programming. It’s understandable, considering the volume of people who go online for their news now, especially from work.

The other overlooked news medium is IRC. CNN has a chat server at chat.cnn.com, but they seem to have frequent problems keeping the headline stream running. I came across an IRC feed second-hand from Fox News today, but I don’t know where the original source is from. If I could find that I’d turn it into an applet of some kind. Oh well.

Bombs over Baghdad

The war against Iraq has begun. Any day that sees force used to achieve peace is a sad day. I don’t want to get into the politics or my opinions on the war, because I am quite opinionated about it but I prefer friendly discussions, not preaching from a pulpit.

I stumbled across a link to Where is Raed?, a blog from someone inside Baghdad. I’m in the process of reading through it now, but it’s interesting and enlightening to see things from the eyes of someone who is living in Iraq.

War is hell, as the old saying goes. The safety of the coalition soldiers and innocent civilians will be in my thoughts.

Springtime allergies

I’ve been lucky to suffer little from seasonal allergies. Unfortunately, the same cannot be said for our cats. I returned home from work tonight to find my poor kittie sneezing and rubbing at one watering and swollen eye. He seems to get the brunt of the feline allergies. Two or three times a year he mopes around the house looking generally pathetic and meowing for attention, so I give him some wet food and give him some sympathy.

His sister kitty, Min, is pathetic all-year around. She suffers from allergies, too, but not nearly as often or severe. Of course, I suspect she thinks it’s the end of the world for her. She’s asleep against me right now, laying on top of my arm. She’s actually quite adorable.

DVD Saturday

We’re doing a DVD marathon today, a rare but welcome break from work. This morning we visited the Marion E. Wade Center at Wheaton College, dedicated to the works of C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien, among others. I took more pictures this time, with my new digital camera. I’ll post those in a few days.

We’re watching the four-hour extended edition of Fellowship of the Ring now. For the intermission we will order take-out from Gen-Hoe, the best Chinese restaurant I’ve ever eaten at. Then we’ll finish the evening with another round of the trilogy. *cough*

The weatherman forecast a beautiful weekend, but so far it has been rather questionable. We woke to a fog that lasted for the entire morning. It eventually burned off, but the damage is done. We were at least ten degrees below the original forecast in the 60’s. Hopefully the fog won’t be an issue tomorrow. They are still calling for a 65 degree day, which will be excellent weather for working in the garage.

Replicate this

I’m working a late night at Ditto tonight, finally rebuilding replication between some of my databases. It’s boring, painfully slow work that makes me respect competent Database Administrators even more than I already do. While SQL Server does it’s thing, I’m watching The Matrix on my iBook, and I have two stories to critique for group tomorrow night. At the rate replication is going, I’ll be here half the night, so I should have plenty of time to get it all done.

On Monday, Trey mentioned something in his journal that struck a chord. Losing interest in a story once you’ve put time and effort into it. The same thing has happened to me with Temperament. I was enthusiastic writing the first draft, and even while I was marking up the copy for edits. Somewhere through making the edits, though, I realized something was missing with the story. It was too clichè, too much like every other fantasy story I’ve read. Trite. I came to realize something. The traditional fantasy genre, i.e., swords and/or sorcery in a medieval setting, has been played out ad nauseum. I don’t think the genre as a whole has been overused, but the traditional setting has. One of the things I’ve seen lately (which doesn’t necessarily mean that it’s new, just new to me) is traditional fantasy elements in a more modern setting. I also have some pure science fiction stories in my head that I’d like to explore.

Writing is about expression and exploration. We keep writing and adapting, because that’s the way it is meant to be.